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Danger - Edit The Tuxedo With each drop of blood, my tux morphed. The black-tie jacket with ribbed silk facings on the shawl’s collar suddenly looked like a raw wool sort jacket with knee length pants...
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S---this trilogy would serve as the screenplay for a new Pedro Almodóvar film---for example---his very first small movie---a trilogy--- Pepi, Luci, Bom y otras chicas del montónwhat a smash opening...
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Thank you Bernie. I am glad you like that first stanza. Everyone less seems to focus on the other two stanzas. Yes, I am trying very hard to write away my fears about my heart problems. And it seems...
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By the way, me showing up at a wedding dressed in Mayan clothes was actually real. I was living in Tuxtla Gutierrez and I was invited by some of the people in my boarding house to attend a wedding (I...
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Hi saore. Overall I found the set a little too jumpy for my comfort as a reader. A little more specifically, I didn't think the jacket/jacket subject of S1 did much - a little too much about this...
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saore, I liked S1 best although I had difficulty understanding it. S2 was easily understood, but that's because it's a basic description of a surgery until the last line which is nice. Again, didn't...
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Thank you Frank. Actually I am glad someone does no like this poem. I certainly don't like all the poems I read, I imagine everyone is the same. Viva l'diferance, as they say. Thank you Billy I am...
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saore, I usually have at least "one" suggestion. I don't. I think it's done beautifully. If I think of anything I'll come back. Have read this a few times now and just very pleased with how you have...
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Kathleen, thank you. Your words are encouraging! I have edited the poem, and it has been accepted for publication. Sergio
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